i think the 5th is the best. its the darkest with the model with furthest from the camera. to me it says "fuck off, im smoking." i dig it. i think if you put that one in your gallery by itself, id have to it
the only problem i see is the postion of the hand holding the cig...cant quite place why though...which i know isnt exactly helpful....

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the 4th and 5th one and further no complains.

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i pick the 5th din, ung 1st nagreflect ung light mo sa window eh (un nga ba un), sa 2nd naman it's the pose, sa 3rd, kulang pa siguro sa 'to hell with it' attitude ^^ ung sa last para kang may sakit ung 5th ung pinakaswak na pose, pero kakaiba ka nga maghawak ng cigarette XDDD

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I like the 1st 1 the most

I like the last one, because the near horozontal position of the model (I bet it's you) is balanced out with the vertical line of where the wall meets and forms a corner.

The first one and the fourth one is attempting to be like the last, but the light that comes from the back destroys the line of the corner, and it seems way to personal/up close.

The second has potential if you bring in more of the ceiling, since it is more of a vertical composition, because it looks way to cramped like it is.

The third is something like the second, but the way that the model is looking into the camera makes the empasis of smoking in the solitude of chaos unimportant.

The fifth one is my second favourite, it's more of a solitary piece...


I hope I was of help.

I like NO.3

The last one too messy made me ^_^

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you smoke? dude you gotta clean up your place man.

composition-wise, the 5th.. tho i do like the lighting in the 3rd..

nice blinds really adds to the messynessingness

you want to put the emphasis on the subject (the smoker), that's 2.

5 is also good, with the light leading the eyes to the subject.

nice lights. \m/

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I like NO.4, both for the angle and lighting..just feeling..

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